I cry for today,
Sweet cries for tomorrow.
I know deep inside,
Im still filled with sorrow.
I cry for today,
For it will be yesterday,
Tomorrow.
And I saved my sweet cries for tomorrow.
My sweet cries,
Are like sweet potato fries.
Naturally sweet, but added salt.
My sweet cries, always turn into more.
I dont want to cry anymore.
But i cry for today,
Sweet cries for tomorrow.
Because i know deep inside,
Im still filled with sorrow.
Analysis
This poem is one I feel emotional about. I think the theme is that crying is not always a bad thing. And the tone is sad. I used a simile when i said"My sweet cries,Are like sweet potato fries" but i added sensory details with my emotions in the poem. i usede repetition when i said "sweet cries" After reading over it, I really did like it.
Sweet cries for tomorrow.
I know deep inside,
Im still filled with sorrow.
I cry for today,
For it will be yesterday,
Tomorrow.
And I saved my sweet cries for tomorrow.
My sweet cries,
Are like sweet potato fries.
Naturally sweet, but added salt.
My sweet cries, always turn into more.
I dont want to cry anymore.
But i cry for today,
Sweet cries for tomorrow.
Because i know deep inside,
Im still filled with sorrow.
Analysis
This poem is one I feel emotional about. I think the theme is that crying is not always a bad thing. And the tone is sad. I used a simile when i said"My sweet cries,Are like sweet potato fries" but i added sensory details with my emotions in the poem. i usede repetition when i said "sweet cries" After reading over it, I really did like it.